Prompt: End your story with “Hello Jones!”This story has been removed for further editing and refining.. Hopefully it will be submitted to competitions and perhaps an Anthology...
thanks for popping by when it WAS up.. and leaving your comments
Authors Note: Again on my quest to try different genres - this week I visit Cyberpunk. For a list of a great deal more genres - check here.
6 comments:
I quite like the story.
I must admit, I didn't see that ending coming. Nicely done.
I enjoyed breading your story and also love the look of your site. I look forward to reading you again.
I'm beginning to think that there isn't a genre you can't conquer. Your swept me right into the world without any trouble. I was left wanting more.
Wow that was great!! And I will check out the site you listed.
http://tammy-justtammy.blogspot.com/2009/08/fiction-friday-81409.html
I like the story and the twist ending. I also really enjoy how you try different genres each week. The fiction Friday is really a neat way to get to do that.
Gosh this had me totally suckered in. This is in complete contrast to the other smatterings of cyberpunk I've read before (Snow Crash being the best example)
I love the merging of high technology and the streets of 18th century London. Really brilliant. I'll start breathing now!
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