Prompt: Your story involves an invasion of privacy.This story has been removed for further editing and refining.. Its been submitted to a competition and perhaps will appear in an Anthology...
thanks for popping by when it WAS up.. and leaving your comments..
wish me luck!
7 comments:
I enjoyed reading your story. I actually laughed out loud at "its face copied from an old boyfriends website."
I enjoyed your story very much. The technology sounds futuristic but still obtainable.
As ever you sketch in your worlds with well-placed clues, one of the things I most admire about your work. A very nice twist at the end, too, and the "custom personalities" of the AIs were well conveyed as well.
It is good to be back. Thank you for the comment.
Very interesting story...I liked the twist. Fighting with what we imagine can often be, as it was in this case, a person's undoing.
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How very Gibsonian of you! :) Gah. Sorry. That was really meant to be a compliment, but I despise comparisons between authors. Hopefully it is received well.
I liked this. It showed creative thinking (which is not a statement I make often, or even believe applies in most cases). A very enjoyable read!
Annie, good story. I enjoyed it that I reread it twice :)
Also, it's quite different from your usual stories I read so far. Thanks for sharing!
Love the detailed description of the futuruistic stuff and the character's attitude. I have so much to learn. Thanks 4 sharing!
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