Friday, October 22, 2010

Passage of Darkness

This story has been removed for further editing and refining.. Hopefully it will be submitted to competitions and perhaps an Anthology...


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Prompt -Include this theme in your story… "After a long night, a hunter sees something he/she cannot believe."

Story inspired by the [Fiction Friday] prompt at Write Anything and submitted to JM Strother’s #FridayFlash  via TwitterThis story will be recorded and posted up for Spoken Sunday via Audio Boo 

6 comments:

Icy Sedgwick said...

Wow, he is one calm customer! I'd be a bit freaked out if something I'd shot started moving, but he handled it with such ease - if this was a movie, he'd be Kurt Russell.

twinklebelle said...

A kangaroo animated by a goanna,now that's not something your expect to see. Was dissapointed for your man to not catch sight of his dingo's.

Shelli said...

I liked your setting with this piece, it made me feel like I was in the outback with him.

Stacey said...

I love how you've made it seem that there is something supernatural going on and there is actually a mundane explanation... a bit of a reverse on what usually happens!

John Pender said...

I was half expecting the roo to come back to life and chase after him, and was wondering how it was going to do that minus legs. The goanna was a good twist. Made me laugh.

Laura Rachel Fox said...

Lovely twist. You were able to bring the setting and character to life. I have no real experience with hunting or the Outback setting, but I still felt as if I was there, seeing and feeling everything.