As usual, a very intriguing and classy piece, splashed with a little bit dark humor. I like how you can turn something gross (like drool) into a wonderful journey. Love it!
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A very intriguing read. You had me guessing for a while.
As usual, a very intriguing and classy piece, splashed with a little bit dark humor. I like how you can turn something gross (like drool) into a wonderful journey. Love it!
mine:
http://anandserpi.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/the-storage-room/
Oooh.. very intriguing.. Moral of the story, careful with someone who looks perfect :p I love this piece!
I had to stop and regroup...it was a good story to say the least. Thank you Annie.
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http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2010/01/wallet.html
your Edgar character is definitely not a hunk. he he. But this was intriguing. For a while i thought this was about vampires...
Very intriguing. It shows that perfection always have its price.
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