Friday, January 15, 2010

The Pursuit of Perfection

This story has been removed to be edited and rewritten for competition and submissions elsewhere.


Its been published over at Soft Whispers  so please do check it out.

6 comments:

Paul said...

A very intriguing read. You had me guessing for a while.

anandserpi said...

As usual, a very intriguing and classy piece, splashed with a little bit dark humor. I like how you can turn something gross (like drool) into a wonderful journey. Love it!

mine:

http://anandserpi.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/the-storage-room/

Dikha said...

Oooh.. very intriguing.. Moral of the story, careful with someone who looks perfect :p I love this piece!

b said...

I had to stop and regroup...it was a good story to say the least. Thank you Annie.

b

http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2010/01/wallet.html

Ther said...

your Edgar character is definitely not a hunk. he he. But this was intriguing. For a while i thought this was about vampires...

vivi said...

Very intriguing. It shows that perfection always have its price.