Saturday, June 18, 2011

Sick with Sadness

This story has been removed to be polished for submissions.


wish me luck
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This is a first draft.
PROMPT:   Use this sentiment or theme for your story “Sick with Sadness”
This story inspired by the [Fiction Friday] prompt at Write Anything  and submitted to JM Strother’s #FridayFlash via Twitter.  

Its also recorded as a Spoken Sunday on Audioboo

3 comments:

Adam B said...

What a clever set up. I liked the opening image of the hole in the blanket, making it larger.
Adam B @revhappiness

JMH said...

Love your flash! Fantastic graphics! Great writing.

Expat said...

For me, this was so well written every sentence, every word, held my attention, and made me want to find out where it was going. And it went to a great finish.