Friday, November 5, 2010

Sliver

This story has been removed to be redrafted and used in a larger piece.  Thanks for popping over and reading it when you did!
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Prompt -Include this theme in your story… Your Main Character picks a sliver of glass from their sleeve and gravely inspects it……..( now keep writing)

Story inspired by the [Fiction Friday] prompt at Write Anything and submitted to JM Strother’s #FridayFlash  via TwitterThis story will be recorded and posted up for Spoken Sunday via Audio Boo

8 comments:

TCPannone said...

Great use of the prompt. It was a tricky this week. Put me right in the scene.

Mine:
http://tcpannone.blogspot.com/2010/11/fiction-friday-180.html

Melissa said...

I agree. I like how you came up with a whole creative plot from that kind of prompt. Job well done!

John Pender said...

I'm eager to read more!

bellspace said...

how do I get me one of those gravity boosters, would come in handy some days when I'm trying to escape! The world of your story captivated me, I like the idea of a chic out there travelling the galaxy and kicking butt.

Ruchiraa said...

Prison planets,preying carnivores, assassins: this was so cool! Very creative.

Steve Green said...

Brilliant sci-fi writing, I would like to read a lot more of this story, the capture, the chase, the escape, the retribution. Gimme gimme. :)

Annie said...

Thanks so much for your kind words!!

LaraDunning said...

Great setting such a complicated stage in short period of time. Nice to see a woman escaping from prision and on the run. Was she Mongolian? Or trained there?