Thursday, November 12, 2009

Hideaway



Prompt: . A woman whose husband is killed during a tour of duty decides to turn her home into a boarding house.
This story has been removed to be redrafted and polished for competitions/ publication.  Wish me luck!

2 comments:

Unknown said...

I nearly didn't post this week as I know this story is underdeveloped and has many holes in it - and my fingers are itching to edit all the things out I don't like or are clunky. NaNo is here and I am just not able to focus or draw upon my creative well as I normally can.. or something....
Hope you enjoyed the concept at least.

Paul said...

I found it quite intriguing. And it's far more developed than my piece was. It really needs rewriting.