Prompt: Write about a three way misunderstanding .This first draft story has ben removed so that it can be edited and rewritten for use in competitions or submissions.
Thursday, July 9, 2009
Dream Catcher
Prompt: Write about a three way misunderstanding .This first draft story has ben removed so that it can be edited and rewritten for use in competitions or submissions.
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thanks for popping over and leaving a comment - I am out of internet range alot of the time for the next two weeks and I WILL come and comment on your story if you leave your link here. I value feedback and enjoy reading others work.
My intention was to write a flash fiction of under 500 words based on an experience I have just had in hospital. I hope I captured those helpless feelings.
You definitely caught that helpless feeling, Annie, that loss of control and confused impressions, it was actually a little chilling to read, brought back memories.
Mine own:
http://eclecticchair.wordpress.com/2009/07/10/fiction-friday-the-best-laid-plans-of-moce-and-shakespeare/
I agree with James...really captured that well with words. Nice. I like the description of Neds eyes too.
Mine:
http://uncleteebooks.blogspot.com/2009/07/fiction-friday-july10-2009.html
That was great. I was anticipating one twist in the story and was thinking oh well, she's just hallucinating, then bam! a second twist which brings it back to something sinister. I loved it.
Wish I could write really short stories with that kind of impact. Great scene setting and twists. Really good.
Mini is here
http://almckillop.wordpress.com/2009/07/10/fiction-friday-3/
Cheers
Al
This was greeat to read
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