Friday, June 26, 2009

Virtual Invasion

Prompt: Your story involves an invasion of privacy.



This story has been removed for further editing and refining.. Its been submitted to a competition and perhaps will appear in an Anthology...

thanks for popping by when it WAS up.. and leaving your comments..

wish me luck!


7 comments:

Joe Kas said...

I enjoyed reading your story. I actually laughed out loud at "its face copied from an old boyfriends website."

Chris said...

I enjoyed your story very much. The technology sounds futuristic but still obtainable.

James Ashelford said...

As ever you sketch in your worlds with well-placed clues, one of the things I most admire about your work. A very nice twist at the end, too, and the "custom personalities" of the AIs were well conveyed as well.

b said...

It is good to be back. Thank you for the comment.

Very interesting story...I liked the twist. Fighting with what we imagine can often be, as it was in this case, a person's undoing.

b

Jerald Jackson said...

How very Gibsonian of you! :) Gah. Sorry. That was really meant to be a compliment, but I despise comparisons between authors. Hopefully it is received well.

I liked this. It showed creative thinking (which is not a statement I make often, or even believe applies in most cases). A very enjoyable read!

kajoemanis said...

Annie, good story. I enjoyed it that I reread it twice :)
Also, it's quite different from your usual stories I read so far. Thanks for sharing!

anandserpi said...

Love the detailed description of the futuruistic stuff and the character's attitude. I have so much to learn. Thanks 4 sharing!