tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post3484853450795381015..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: Whispering ExitAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-43421303084517645102009-05-28T12:07:06.418+10:002009-05-28T12:07:06.418+10:00even having known the roles were changed from our ...even having known the roles were changed from our discussions on the way to the theatre it was still intriguing.<br /><br />I don't think I've ever seen you use so many adverbs in such a small space. There's something about writing romance/sex/erotica etc that screams OVERUSE ADVERBS!Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-39259715291003413882009-05-23T19:11:43.008+10:002009-05-23T19:11:43.008+10:00I was wondering whether anyone would swap the role...I was wondering whether anyone would swap the roles as you have done (unless I've misread). I liked that you changed them. It made for a more interesting read.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02105333544917808423noreply@blogger.com