tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post9220008953538472601..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: Decipio LemuresAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-11868104426609467642014-01-22T21:46:33.619+10:002014-01-22T21:46:33.619+10:00:) excellent story needs a different finish:) excellent story needs a different finishAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-26930736346267936912014-01-22T21:46:31.219+10:002014-01-22T21:46:31.219+10:00:) excellent story needs a different finish:) excellent story needs a different finishAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-15270154512803611182011-04-13T03:07:30.718+10:002011-04-13T03:07:30.718+10:00Very gripping. I bet it smelled horrible down ther...Very gripping. I bet it smelled horrible down there. Years of rotting canned food busting open. One typo in "Madison smiled conspiritually.” She’s solid," the " is in the wrong place. This guy will be extra pleased with himself now, he did get a good deal.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-31149420423625500202011-04-11T15:44:40.057+10:002011-04-11T15:44:40.057+10:00Very amusing. I'll never be the same again whe...Very amusing. I'll never be the same again when I hear glass breaking.Paulhttp://merewords1958.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-56923565856139217242011-04-11T02:08:49.786+10:002011-04-11T02:08:49.786+10:00I like the way “looks being deceiving” applied twi...I like the way “looks being deceiving” applied twice in the story, giving it a nice depth.<br /><br />PS: although I could imagine them enjoying a "walk in panty" if they've had enough beers, it probably won't interest them for long.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-59622410025426477032011-04-10T13:57:58.601+10:002011-04-10T13:57:58.601+10:00Hehe, love a good ghost story. Thanks for comment...Hehe, love a good ghost story. Thanks for commenting over at mine too, until next week :)tanya bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11675926010129702369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-56415242931610895622011-04-10T04:45:05.454+10:002011-04-10T04:45:05.454+10:00Amusing story, I like that it wasn't ghosts bu...Amusing story, I like that it wasn't ghosts but something mundane that everyone assumes isn't. <br />WendyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01573944166897159858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-30028789028079326742011-04-10T01:05:22.355+10:002011-04-10T01:05:22.355+10:00I loved this! It got me from the start and I could...I loved this! It got me from the start and I could not stop reading until I got to the end.<br />Great use of the prompt, you really fooled me, here I was expecting some hideous undead ghost, but this was so much better than that.<br />AlannahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-71716776758697702302011-04-09T23:58:21.737+10:002011-04-09T23:58:21.737+10:00Nice work, Annie. Wondered for a while where it wa...Nice work, Annie. Wondered for a while where it was going, but a clever ending.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com