tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post8421691117209752037..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: The Power of RecognitionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-57784897334925138442009-06-03T13:40:19.412+10:002009-06-03T13:40:19.412+10:00Thanks one and all - be sure to go and visit http:...Thanks one and all - be sure to go and visit http://www.captainjuan.com to find out about Ruby ( Marcus's wife) what the festivities are really all about and get involved with the courtly intrigue spinning around.<br /><br />It is a first draft - so things do need tightening up - but heck - thats what this is about - getting blood on the page.<br />I appreciate all your commentsAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-65692075133967538612009-06-01T22:57:09.092+10:002009-06-01T22:57:09.092+10:00I enjoyed your story. Good use of the [Fiction] Fr...I enjoyed your story. Good use of the [Fiction] Friday cahllenge.Uncle Teehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566469545552643903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-60743116341963768892009-05-31T22:28:52.439+10:002009-05-31T22:28:52.439+10:00I'm definitely intrigued! Did Marcus kill his own...I'm definitely intrigued! Did Marcus kill his own wife? Why doesn't he grieve for his father and how does the doge know?<br /><br />I guess I must read the other stories and wait impatiently for the next episode;)<br /><br />Have a lovely weekend!Joanna Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15426888036332739631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-83335527057230183462009-05-30T00:53:25.861+10:002009-05-30T00:53:25.861+10:00An intriguing story that makes me want to know mor...An intriguing story that makes me want to know more. You have succeeded very well in using the "medieval" tone and rhythms of speech, transporting us into that time period.<br /><br />For that reason, such anachronisms as "time out" and "paperwork" didn't quite work for me, but hey. Minor stuff.M. D. Benoithttp://mdbenoit.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-45613170677784419992009-05-29T23:16:35.373+10:002009-05-29T23:16:35.373+10:00Ahh Marcus - you have so patiently bade your time ...Ahh Marcus - you have so patiently bade your time in the Green Room waiting to enter from left of stage once more :)<br /><br />I am intrigued Annie to know of the past connections with the Doge - who obviously knows him well. Has he been telling you secrets?<br /><br />Thumbs up for the weaving in of the prompt. I want to see how TIME OUT works in Juan's world!!Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-2165739302641103002009-05-29T19:05:06.841+10:002009-05-29T19:05:06.841+10:00I liked it, a very left-field choice for the promp...I liked it, a very left-field choice for the prompt. I'll admit a bias here in that I love stories of Early Modern politics and you're Doge interests me for his political savvy in dealing with his visitor and in his protective attitude towards the Rromani. <br /><br />I'll definitely be coming back later to read through the past stories in this series, thanks you.James Ashelfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06921809149099140714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-67934325515889725672009-05-29T18:26:14.896+10:002009-05-29T18:26:14.896+10:00Hi Annie, always entertaining reading your posts. ...Hi Annie, always entertaining reading your posts. I am intrigued by the adventures of this Spaniard.<br /><br />My post is here: http://thanihaveeverdone.blogspot.com/2009/05/fiction-friday-challenge-for-29-may.htmlBillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02105333544917808423noreply@blogger.com