tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post7911796664877885042..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: La Petite Fee SourisAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-37336723813821929762010-09-21T08:19:27.072+10:002010-09-21T08:19:27.072+10:00Fun piece. So that's what happened? They just ...Fun piece. So that's what happened? They just quit coming around so they could shirk work? Man what I relief. I was beginning to wonder if they were real. ;)<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/MadUtopia/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-78179593858035989672010-09-20T22:58:22.947+10:002010-09-20T22:58:22.947+10:00I loved the running through the various excuses - ...I loved the running through the various excuses - nice inner monologue.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-21313323616708615952010-09-20T06:32:57.743+10:002010-09-20T06:32:57.743+10:00Wonderful. I could feel the Tis's anxiety as s...Wonderful. I could feel the Tis's anxiety as she searched for an acceptable excuse. Reminds me of my school days and some domineering teachers. <br /><br />The dialog is perfect and kept the flow of the piece running nicely.Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-9183920647576988762010-09-19T20:58:56.669+10:002010-09-19T20:58:56.669+10:00I loved the imagery in this, and the idea of the t...I loved the imagery in this, and the idea of the truant tooth fairy!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16675799736197726920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-17526463326710558422010-09-19T05:48:53.619+10:002010-09-19T05:48:53.619+10:00This was a great prompt and it's been so much ...This was a great prompt and it's been so much fun to read everyone's stories.<br />I had no idea the tooth fairy in France is a mouse. :) So cute. You learn something new every day...LRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16839870925431989156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-18232960409023657592010-09-19T02:43:42.898+10:002010-09-19T02:43:42.898+10:00Aw poor Tooth Fairy having to work a double shift ...Aw poor Tooth Fairy having to work a double shift but serves her right for slacking off ;-)<br />Very good!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com