tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post7301273867414546346..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: Wish you were here...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-55221268916799505342008-02-23T23:11:00.000+10:002008-02-23T23:11:00.000+10:00Thanks guys - this prompt really had be paniced - ...Thanks guys - this prompt really had be paniced - nothing came to me till Turion "visited"..... I guess I write scinece fiction now... am really keen to explore his world now...The Evett Familyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14446705455904014061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-65714679085400763412008-02-23T20:45:00.000+10:002008-02-23T20:45:00.000+10:00I liked this - the desolation, almost post-apocaly...I liked this - the desolation, almost post-apocalyptic. You created an excellent atmosphere.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-59705671213757339652008-02-23T14:18:00.000+10:002008-02-23T14:18:00.000+10:00Loved it! As a Floyd fanatic I always thought they...Loved it! As a Floyd fanatic I always thought they were philosophers! Leaves you wanting more to answer all the questions it raises. <BR/>(from Dave, not Jodi).Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-80085589354178747692008-02-23T13:51:00.000+10:002008-02-23T13:51:00.000+10:00This is absolutely brilliant Annie - to quote the ...This is absolutely brilliant Annie - to quote the Castle "its gold!" Thank you Turion of visiting Annie.<BR/><BR/>I love Mr Floyd as the philosopher, I could just keep raving abvout how much I liked this - but instead I'll pass the computer over to Dave as he should read this also!<BR/><BR/>Congratulations Annie - it hasn't taken you long to hit your writing stride ... and who says 'But I dont write science fiction.'Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-53973194068255875692008-02-23T10:03:00.000+10:002008-02-23T10:03:00.000+10:00Terrific piece. This is the most difficult prompt ...Terrific piece. This is the most difficult prompt I've encountered anywhere, and your take on it is just magic.Keith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-5676240526398613732008-02-23T07:13:00.000+10:002008-02-23T07:13:00.000+10:00I really like this. Creative take on a difficult ...I really like this. Creative take on a difficult prompt. You also do a good job of building the world slowly through show-not-tell.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-56830664886494061252008-02-23T06:28:00.000+10:002008-02-23T06:28:00.000+10:00Nice Work!Nice Work!Eileenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04656865511091957977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-53016093784773859252008-02-23T00:44:00.000+10:002008-02-23T00:44:00.000+10:00I love the futuristic take on this. It was very ni...I love the futuristic take on this. It was very nicely done, and it's interesting the different parts of the song that people are focusing on this week, provided that they recognize it. One person so far hasn't.Square1https://www.blogger.com/profile/13559171378908608414noreply@blogger.com