tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post5393061193005386706..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: AquaphobiaAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-34041042154298696272009-06-23T05:31:01.879+10:002009-06-23T05:31:01.879+10:00Very nice. I like the charactors and the scene.
M...Very nice. I like the charactors and the scene.<br /><br />Mine:<br /><br />http://uncleteebooks.blogspot.com/2009/06/fiction-friday-june-19-2009.htmlUncle Teehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566469545552643903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-3298176107167511522009-06-23T01:21:41.229+10:002009-06-23T01:21:41.229+10:00as always, I loved how you wrote things descriptiv...as always, I loved how you wrote things descriptively but not boring!<br />The story paces are written smoothly and it gave me a hit as I approached the end of the story: a pirate attack.<br /><br />Readers can read mine:<br />http://tyuditha.wordpress.comkajoemanisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-70165235926411205192009-06-21T10:50:47.615+10:002009-06-21T10:50:47.615+10:00Good stuff and great fun. The sheer joy of swimmi...Good stuff and great fun. The sheer joy of swimming was wonderful to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-43152555371107586512009-06-21T08:52:23.971+10:002009-06-21T08:52:23.971+10:00Nice work. I liked that they were concerned about...Nice work. I liked that they were concerned about the fish that were killed with the first explosion near the ship. Good cliffhanger, too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-22118034442239750192009-06-20T22:48:19.593+10:002009-06-20T22:48:19.593+10:00Pirates!!!! Great cliffhanger after and suitably c...Pirates!!!! Great cliffhanger after and suitably charged after the sedate nature of the swim.dan powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-10049974071332506152009-06-20T00:23:17.404+10:002009-06-20T00:23:17.404+10:00The fish under the fingernails is fabulous!
I lov...The fish under the fingernails is fabulous! <br />I loved it.<br /><br />Here's mine!<br /><br />http://gigidiaz.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/finally/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-85449935825768153992009-06-19T22:18:37.305+10:002009-06-19T22:18:37.305+10:00Most unexpected ending and very topical.Most unexpected ending and very topical.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-17320001698353698282009-06-19T19:02:21.133+10:002009-06-19T19:02:21.133+10:00(Bruno grunted. “Saves us having fish guts in our ...(Bruno grunted. “Saves us having fish guts in our fingernails.”<br />“Might have been an improvement on your smell”)<br /><br />my fave line! Very cool story. Looking forward to read the rest of it. <br /><br />check mine :<br /><br />http://anandserpi.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/clarks-secret-identity/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-31456584256754157262009-06-19T18:30:07.546+10:002009-06-19T18:30:07.546+10:00Always enjoy your writing! Mine is here: http://t...Always enjoy your writing! Mine is here: http://thanihaveeverdone.blogspot.com/Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02105333544917808423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-67900653430512122242009-06-19T18:27:31.521+10:002009-06-19T18:27:31.521+10:00You deliver a great hook at the end of the piece w...You deliver a great hook at the end of the piece with the attack. It works well after the calm of the rest of the scene. <br /><br />What I liked most, though, was the signora's simple joy at swimming. I suppose I'm just a sucker for that sort of scene. <br /><br />My own humble submission:<br /><br />http://eclecticchair.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/fiction-friday-reyes-angel/James Ashelfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06921809149099140714noreply@blogger.com