tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post4387202628910202107..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: Grandads AtticAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-50467937343787625692010-08-04T02:30:56.181+10:002010-08-04T02:30:56.181+10:00Poor grandad... *shakes her head*. I hope someone ...Poor grandad... *shakes her head*. I hope someone else recovers a hidden stash of awesome.<br /><br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-37918158748001400252010-07-31T14:47:02.454+10:002010-07-31T14:47:02.454+10:00I absolutely loved this story Annie. No word of a ...I absolutely loved this story Annie. No word of a lie the biggest pulling attraction to me relocating in Melbourne was to see a game or two at the MCG. I loves the good game you see. Your two characters are ignorant savages for whom stoning would be too good. That was so very ace, thank you!Jason Cogginshttp://www.moultworld.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-17631552266872898422010-07-31T11:46:04.500+10:002010-07-31T11:46:04.500+10:00It reminded me of the scene in "A Christmas C...It reminded me of the scene in "A Christmas Carol" where the townspeople are going through Scrooge's belongings after he dies. And I just compared you to Dickens! Well done.Shellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03068094486297918345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-48926045975038066242010-07-31T07:57:17.681+10:002010-07-31T07:57:17.681+10:00Totally irreverant and utterly delightful! A joy t...Totally irreverant and utterly delightful! A joy to read.keiths ramblingshttp://www.keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-66914138370532146612010-07-31T07:42:16.314+10:002010-07-31T07:42:16.314+10:00Oh, Lord. I have relatives exactly like this. Grea...Oh, Lord. I have relatives exactly like this. Great story, Annie. The dialogue flowed very smoothly and naturally.John Penderhttp://johnpender.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-38148458765663303612010-07-31T06:28:54.044+10:002010-07-31T06:28:54.044+10:00I'm so glad that such horrible individuals got...I'm so glad that such horrible individuals got nothing! Oh, they're a right pair, aren't they? You really made me dislike them! Sign of good characterisation.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-34890002621366088792010-07-31T01:46:34.310+10:002010-07-31T01:46:34.310+10:00I absolutely love the opening paragraph. A beauti...I absolutely love the opening paragraph. A beautiful description that not only gives the reader a setting, but also speaks to the mood of the characters. <br /><br />Leaving the manner of Gran's death open to interpretation was a wonderful idea. I love it when writers let me use my own imagination.<br /><br />Great work.Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-32492001036023624652010-07-31T00:38:28.790+10:002010-07-31T00:38:28.790+10:00Where there's a will, I want to be in it.
Grea...Where there's a will, I want to be in it.<br />Great dialogue as always. Greed will always make people do the strangest things.<br />Adam BAdam Byatthttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-83949804884494817342010-07-30T23:32:11.990+10:002010-07-30T23:32:11.990+10:00Your conversation sounds so natural. I fell right ...Your conversation sounds so natural. I fell right into the scene with your great description. I felt like a fly on the wall watching and listening. Really an enjoyable read. Thanks!Tiffany Herrnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-66378799304669709562010-07-30T22:26:06.791+10:002010-07-30T22:26:06.791+10:00yeah... Anastasia... it was.... ha ha...
and yes ...yeah... Anastasia... it was.... ha ha...<br /><br />and yes Walt.. evil little money grabbing buggers.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-76811373529999048902010-07-30T21:11:51.544+10:002010-07-30T21:11:51.544+10:00“Neesha, he was going to die anyway. Only a matter...<em>“Neesha, he was going to die anyway. Only a matter of time. Any one of us would have done it.”</em> I enjoyed the story but that line really grabbed my attention.<br /><br />Well doneWalthttp://www.waltinpa.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-48719912203332867342010-07-30T15:19:18.963+10:002010-07-30T15:19:18.963+10:00Hehehe please tell me that was granddad's erm....Hehehe please tell me that was granddad's erm... protector? ;)Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16675799736197726920noreply@blogger.com