tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post2852086324090162463..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: Seeking SunjuroAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-74707596935685367152009-09-04T16:15:48.318+10:002009-09-04T16:15:48.318+10:00You always write a cracking fight scene.
You pain...You always write a cracking fight scene.<br /><br />You paint an interesting juxapositon with the quiet contemplative man at the start and the fierce, measured fighter at the end. But do it in such a way you believe the two can be the same man.<br /><br />Interesting genre. More from here?Jodi Cleghornhttp://jodicleghorn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-56568306213837010042009-08-22T11:14:51.427+10:002009-08-22T11:14:51.427+10:00Another great read! You really have a gift for cre...Another great read! You really have a gift for creating another world and getting the reader to totally believe in it without being too wordy or too descriptive. I am able to picture your characters clearly. I like that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-65827871466651433122009-08-22T08:47:09.537+10:002009-08-22T08:47:09.537+10:00WOW! Quite the piece and all in 5 minutes! Great j...WOW! Quite the piece and all in 5 minutes! Great job!<br /><br />That's my two pence...<br />Arial ;)Arial Burnzhttp://www.enchantedwoodz.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-12471873419565482972009-08-22T06:55:44.046+10:002009-08-22T06:55:44.046+10:00Hi Annie,
Great story and well told.
I would l...Hi Annie,<br /><br />Great story and well told. <br /><br />I would love to know what happens next...Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-34567091574775359502009-08-22T06:36:56.161+10:002009-08-22T06:36:56.161+10:00I really enjoyed reading this story. You definite...I really enjoyed reading this story. You definitely do a good job of bringing the reader into the moment. Thanks for sharing this with us!Ronda Levinehttp://writingresearchediting.com/blog.phpnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-74390987542377789802009-08-22T04:36:50.339+10:002009-08-22T04:36:50.339+10:00What a great story. Your writing is so graphic I f...What a great story. Your writing is so graphic I felt I was there!keiths ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/2009/08/hide-and-seek.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-26045618615453522602009-08-22T02:44:28.737+10:002009-08-22T02:44:28.737+10:00Amazing. Definitely a new genre for me. I am so im...Amazing. Definitely a new genre for me. I am so impressed by your writing. This was my first try at Fiction Friday and I am definitely still learning. I wonder how much time you allow yourself? And what is your favorite genre?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com