tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post2321959033691248395..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: LillylollyLous Operatic MomentAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-43753252606714069842009-08-12T00:17:57.817+10:002009-08-12T00:17:57.817+10:00Okay, that was posted under my WAHM blog instead o...Okay, that was posted under my WAHM blog instead of my writing blog (Write Chronicles). Sorry about that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-74198283227624277192009-08-12T00:16:24.418+10:002009-08-12T00:16:24.418+10:00Annie - The names and the story line are very much...Annie - The names and the story line are very much like Seuss although the actual rhythm of the lines is a bit too long to be truly Suess-esque. Despite that, the poem flowed smoothly and I found myself rooting for Lolli to finally sing!<br /><br />Kudos to you for 1) actually attempting Seuss-like poetry, and 2) posting it for review on the Internet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-46775509667947906972009-08-09T23:17:59.235+10:002009-08-09T23:17:59.235+10:00Well done, Annie! I loved reading your piece. When...Well done, Annie! I loved reading your piece. When will I be able to write you do? *sigh*<br /><br />Anyways, I too agreed that this week's FF prompt was very challenging that I almost gave it up myself!<br /><br />However, I managed to submit it with my trembling and sweating body for I'm not so confident about it - I still have so.. much to learn..<br /><br />here it is: http://tyuditha.wordpress.com/2009/08/08/her-nose/Tessahttp://tyuditha.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-31340356301058376842009-08-08T01:59:43.311+10:002009-08-08T01:59:43.311+10:00Don't be so hard on yourself. I actually quit...Don't be so hard on yourself. I actually quite liked this piece and found myself imagining what the pictures would be like if it were a Dr. Seuss book. <br /><br />My story this week presented the same problem for me. I went with an idea that I thought was great then halfway through had no way to end it and ended up slightly embarrassed with the outcome. <br /><br />Isn't that what writing prompts are supposed to do, force us out of our comfort zone a little and help us grow. Great Job.Chris Chartrandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-42143644732439547172009-08-08T00:50:37.995+10:002009-08-08T00:50:37.995+10:00I didn't mean to be anonymous! I am Tiffany! H...I didn't mean to be anonymous! I am Tiffany! Here's my sumission for Fiction Friday:http://itallmeanssomething.wordpress.com/fiction-friday/challenge-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-90765168958126435422009-08-08T00:48:31.735+10:002009-08-08T00:48:31.735+10:00Hi Annie- I thought this was quite clever. It is n...Hi Annie- I thought this was quite clever. It is not easy to do rhyming like that! It flowed great and I sympathized with your character since I too cannot sing a lick. You really poured that out without editing!? I think you are very talented!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-17994031361986846952009-08-07T21:58:32.089+10:002009-08-07T21:58:32.089+10:00Congrats for trying something new. I thought it wa...Congrats for trying something new. I thought it was pretty good. The story was solid and the rhyming wasn't bad. Certainly had a Dr Suess feel. Bet it was fun though.<br /><br />Mine:<br />http://uncleteebooks.blogspot.com/2009/08/fiction-friday-august-7-2009.htmlUncle Teehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566469545552643903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-58507312711280189422009-08-07T20:29:26.498+10:002009-08-07T20:29:26.498+10:00I know you're feeling iffy about this, but I r...I know you're feeling iffy about this, but I really liked it. I thought it was really creative and I got a kick out of it. Thanks for exploring the Dr. Seuss-esque style. <br /><br />As a side note, I wrote a poem the other day with a rhyme scheme and I had an aversion to it. Funny how that works...Ronda Levinehttp://writingresearchediting.com/blog.phpnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-63018973777742863342009-08-06T00:46:06.213+10:002009-08-06T00:46:06.213+10:00note to self... don't try poetry OR Dr Seuss f...note to self... don't try poetry OR Dr Seuss for a LONG time....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.com