tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post2093283686253880856..comments2023-07-07T20:56:35.512+10:00Comments on Flash Fiction By Annie: Golden RomanceAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-14942407308819569192009-09-27T21:55:29.638+10:002009-09-27T21:55:29.638+10:00I confess, I haven't actually read a Barbara C...I confess, I haven't actually read a Barbara Cartland book for many, many years so my recall of her style is rather hazy. But the sudden declaration of passion reminded me of her books.Laetitia :-)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08239718954326223338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-25406776256746302962009-09-25T21:31:38.610+10:002009-09-25T21:31:38.610+10:00Very nice. It even read like a play. I like the so...Very nice. It even read like a play. I like the soldiers twist and how the audiance booed him when they found out he was engaged and the guy at the side of the stage...flicking through the script.<br />Very good.<br /><br />Mine for this week:<br />http://uncleteebooks.blogspot.com/2009/09/fiction-friday-september-25-2009.htmlUncle Teehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566469545552643903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4900836079065859174.post-90841553530174338772009-09-25T17:49:41.118+10:002009-09-25T17:49:41.118+10:00boy this was a bit of a challange for me - re-read...boy this was a bit of a challange for me - re-reading it I know I need to insert more passion, more sidewards glances and seething emotions in order to really capture barbaras style - but its a first draft... and it was strangly fun to write - tongue in cheek...I hope you didn't gag too much with my cliched lines.. big smiles...<br />I also know that Barbara took more than 1000 words to convey her intricate and twisted storylines..so comments are welocome - as is my challange of genre for next weekAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.com